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Book Review | Everything is Just Beginning by Erin Bartels

I almost didn’t request a review copy of Everything is Just Beginning because I wasn’t sure I wanted to go back to 1989, and because I wasn’t sure I wanted to read a novel about a wannabe musician.

But I changed my mind, requested it, and I’m glad I did.

Michael Sullivan has been kicked out of his band and apartment, so has moved in with his uncle. He’s not an immediately likeable character: it’s not immediately clear why he was kicked out of his apartment, but it’s obviously not the first time.

He’s working a basic retail job and grumbling about life, then decides to gatecrash a party in the hope of meeting Dusty Wheeler, a big name in the music business. If Mike can get Dusty to listen to a demo tape, maybe the guys will let him back in the band.

The story is written in first person point of view, which will bug some people.

I like first person, but I do prefer to be in the head of a likeable female character, not a male with a woe-is-me attitude. Yes, the whole story is from Michael’s point of view.

He meets Dusty and Deb Wheeler at the party, although he doesn’t realise it at the time. He also meets their daughter, Natalie, who is blind.

Once Michael gets over himself, he turns into a readable and relatable character. his bravado is hiding a difficult childhood and a desperate desire to be a musician – a proper musician. As he spends time with the Wheeler family, he falls for Natalie (who does not appear to return his feelings), they decide to write music together, and Michael gradually loses what Natalie describes as his morose vibe.

Natalie is also a great character.

She’s had a privileged upbringing, and it’s easy to forget she’s blind. It’s actually been along time since I’ve read a novel with a blind main character. She was musical and clever, with an amazing memory, and it was great to read such an individual and competent character.

As it turned out, the fact the novel was set in 1989 was less about the historic events of 1989 and more about the music … which happens to be the music I grew up with and still prefer listening to, so that was great.

Everything is Just Beginning doesn’t easily fit into a genre.

It’s not explicitly Christian, although it’s fairly obvious the Wheeler family are Christians.

It’s not technically contemporary, but isn’t historical enough to be truly considerd a historical.

It’s not Young Adult fiction, although it does have elements of a coming of age story.

It’s not a romance, in that the core story is Michael’s relationship with music through Natalie, rather than Michaels’ relationship with Natalie.

It’s also not literary fiction, despite the great writing, because there is a definite plot with strong character arcs.

If you like great writing, compelling characters, and a bunch of 1980s music reference, you’ll enjoy Everything is Just Beginning.

Thanks to Revell and NetGalley for providing a free ebook for review.

About Erin Bartels

Erin BartelsErin Bartels is the award-winning author of We Hope for Better ThingsThe Words between UsAll That We Carried, and The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water (coming January 2022). Her short story “This Elegant Ruin” was a finalist in The Saturday Evening Post 2014 Great American Fiction Contest and her poetry has been published by The Lyric. She lives in the capital city of a state that is 40% water, nestled somewhere between angry protesters on the Capitol lawn and couch-burning frat boys at Michigan State University. And yet, she claims it is really quite peaceful.

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About Everything is Just Beginning

An Immersive Story of Music, Struggle, and Starting Over from an Award-Winning Author

Michael Sullivan is a talented lyricist and a decent guitarist, but since he was kicked out of his band (and his apartment), he’s not sure he’ll ever get a record deal. Living with his loser uncle in a beat-up trailer and working a dead-end job, Michael has little reason to hope for a better future. Until the invitation for a swanky New Year’s Eve party shows up in the mailbox. It’s for his uncle, with whom he shares his name, but his uncle is going out of town . . .

On the effervescent night of December 31, 1989–as the Berlin Wall is coming down, the Soviet Union is inching toward democracy, and anything seems possible–Michael will cross paths with the accomplished and enigmatic young heir to a fading musical dynasty, forever altering both of their futures.

Award-winning novelist Erin Bartels enchants with this story of two lonely souls who have exactly what the other one needs–if they could simply turn their focus from what is ending to what is just beginning.

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Book Review | The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water by Erin Bartells

I am not a fan of novels about novelists. It feels a little self-serving … and do we trust them to tell the truth? Is being a writer really like writers portray their profession in fiction? I think not.

But I am a fan of Erin Bartels. I thought The Words Between Us was absolutely brilliant, so when I saw The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water available as a review copy, I immediately clicked. With that title and that cover image, wouldn’t you?

Then I read the book description and I wasn’t so sure:

The best fiction simply tells the truth.
But the truth is never simple.

When novelist Kendra Brennan moves into her grandfather’s old cabin on Hidden Lake, she has a problem and a plan. The problem? An inflammatory letter from A Very Disappointed Reader. The plan? To confront Tyler, her childhood best friend’s brother–and the man who inspired the antagonist in her first book. If she can prove that she told the truth about what happened during those long-ago summers, perhaps she can put the letter’s claims to rest and meet the swiftly approaching deadline for her next book.

But what she discovers as she delves into the murky past is not what she expected. While facing Tyler isn’t easy, facing the consequences of her failed friendship with his sister, Cami, may be the hardest thing she’s ever had to do.

Plumb the depths of the human heart with this emotional exploration of how a friendship dies, how we can face the unforgivable, and how even those who have been hurt can learn to love with abandon.

But I gave it a go because, well, Erin Bartels. And that cover. And the title.

And I’m glad I did.

The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water was brilliant. It’s a compelling story about a wounded character who doesn’t give up her secrets easily, or the secrets she knows about other people. It’s a multi-layered story that is good on the outside and even better underneath. It’s a (mostly) made-up story that rings true because it’s anchored in truth, in the way real people think and feel and act.

It’s a story that reminds us that our truth is not the only truth, and reminds us that our past makes our present, and sometimes we have o to overcome that past in order to have a future.

What it isn’t is “classic” Christian fiction with nice Christian characters who pray and read their Bibles and go to church. But it is a powerful examination of truth, and it’s a story you won’t soon forget.

Thanks to Revell and NetGalley for providing a free ebook for review.

About Erin Bartels

Erin BartelsErin Bartels is the award-winning author of We Hope for Better ThingsThe Words between UsAll That We Carried, and The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water (coming January 2022). Her short story “This Elegant Ruin” was a finalist in The Saturday Evening Post 2014 Great American Fiction Contest and her poetry has been published by The Lyric. She lives in the capital city of a state that is 40% water, nestled somewhere between angry protesters on the Capitol lawn and couch-burning frat boys at Michigan State University. And yet, she claims it is really quite peaceful.

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First Line Friday

First Line Friday | Week 161 | The Words Between Us by Erin Bartels

It’s First Line Friday! That means it’s time to pick up the nearest book and quote the first line. Today I’m sharing from The Words Between Us by Erin Bartels, a book I recently picked up on sale. Here’s the first line from the Chapter One:

Most people only die once. But my father is not most people. He is a monster.

Can you see why I had to quote more than the first sentence? This one definitely got me hooked!

What’s the book nearest you, and what’s the first line?

 

About The Words Between Us

Robin Windsor has spent most of her life under an assumed name, running from her family’s ignominious past. She thought she’d finally found sanctuary in her rather unremarkable used bookstore just up the street from the marina in River City, Michigan. But the store is struggling and the past is hot on her heels.

When she receives an eerily familiar book in the mail on the morning of her father’s scheduled execution, Robin is thrown back to the long-lost summer she met Peter Flynt, the perfect boy who ruined everything. That book–a first edition Catcher in the Rye–is soon followed by the other books she shared with Peter nearly twenty years ago, with one arriving in the mail each day. But why would Peter be making contact after all these years? And why does she have a sinking feeling that she’s about to be exposed all over again?

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