Christian romance novels often feature an epilogue with an engagement or wedding scene.
What’s your view on such epilogues?
I was tempted to give my usual “it depends” answer, using the rationale that some stories will need to include the engagement or wedding scene in order to feel complete, but others will be complete without the engagement or wedding.
But then I reconsidered.
If the story needs an engagement or wedding scene to be complete, that scene should form part of the main novel. It shouldn’t be tacked on at the end.
If the story doesn’t need an engagement or wedding scene, then that scene could be rated in one of several ways:
- It could be excluded. If it’s not needed, why include it?
- It could be moved to the next book in the series, to show the reader how the first couple are moving on in their life together.
- It could be included as an epilogue.
I think epilogues work best when they are doing one of two things:
- Setting up the next story in a series (e.g. introducing the next hero and heroine).
- Following up the characters after significant time has passed since the end of the book e.g. an epilogue at the end of a series which shows where the main characters are months or years later.
I have seen engagement or (more commonly) wedding scenes which successfully set up the next book in a series e.g. by having the new hero and heroine meet at the wedding. I like these: they provide a sense of closure while whetting the reader’s appetite for whatever comes next.
I do think epilogues should be set many months after the conclusion of the novel.
First, because I do wonder if some fictional characters will marry in haste and repent at leisure. Second, because if the engagement or wedding follows the end of the novel too quickly, why not simply include it in the actual novel?
I have heard of authors who use an epilogue as an enticement to get readers to sign up for their email list. I can see the logic behind this, but I also know it annoys those readers who believe the novel should be complete as it is published, i.e. no cliff-hanger endings and no vital epilogues.
A better enticement night be a “bonus scene”.
This could well be a combination engagement or wedding with introducing the next couple. But it could also be a prequel scene or short story, or a deleted scene.
Anyway, those are my thoughts.
What’s your view on epilogues where the couple get engaged or married?